I Call Upon Thee - Comments & Tips

Two sisters, young children, come back from school while practising the incantation for a ritual. When they finally try it, it works, and something bad comes. It's pretty well handled up till there. Then it becomes a little blurry on what actually happens. Could be meant to represent it's probably weird too in the girls' perspective, could be that they lazily didn't really plan it. Could have been really excellent with a bit more work on the second part.